The Hidden:ch18

This article was written by Okand on 2012-02-02 under Novels & Stories.

I was in awe at the strange yet subtlety of the destruction. Smoke and dust was everywhere. It filled the air dense with grey smoke and brown dust. I could see random orange glows in the distance and around me. They flickered like flames. Was this the reason why the room started shaking? I thought. I didn't know what could've done all the destruction, and was almost afraid to leave the room. But my curiosity and urge to find Nicholas over powered my fear. I made my way through partial rubble but at the same time looking at the other half of the still standing prison and the bits and pieces if fire mounds laying around. It was like a missile hit the side of the prison and blew half of it up. Was it a missile? I heard about them when some of the inmates spoke about the warfare in America and a group called the Taliban and terrorists and such. 

I heard multiple inmates moaning and groaning. People were crying and some were calling out for others. I looked over and saw a huge outline that made me guess that not all of the cafeteria was destroyed. The whole area around me was so dense in smoke and dust I had to crouch so I could see a little better and not choke to death. I made my way through the debris and fell into the cafeteria. Out of all the voices calling out I heard one that stood out from the others. I could hear it distinctly. It was Nick! I called out to him and he called back. I followed his voice and found him leaning against a cafeteria table. 'What the hell has happened here??' he asked. 'I don't know. Are you okay?' 'My arm was hit hard by a piece of the ceiling that broke off and fell. I think my arm may have been broken. Not sure though.' 'Hold still' I said. 'I'm gonna get you out of here!' I turned around to look but the smoke restricted my view.  I remembered the direction of where Jamie was. 'I'll be right back!' i said. 'Okay.' replied Nicholas. I looked around one more time trying to review the path I took getting to the cafeteria and new where to go to find Jamey. Instinctively, I made my way outside....




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Top Comment:

By: Koori_shinobi - 2012-02-02 18:59:54 + 2 
O.O Mooooooore.

10 Comments:


By: Okand - 2012-02-03 15:17:22      
You should do that Nightking you're missing a great story haha
By: NightKing - 2012-02-03 11:34:13      
Wow nice story, i have to back track and read them all
By: Okand - 2012-02-03 09:42:31      
I plan on getting it published cloud :p
By: Okand - 2012-02-03 09:41:59      
Actually my grade dances between an A+ and c+ but it's only because of the shit that I'm never going to ever use in that class. Like I'm not going to need to know anything about Edgar Allen poe but I still gotta do 50 packets
By: cloud9 - 2012-02-03 06:47:47      
I would buy ten of these books if it were published hehehehe XD
By: Hakirocks - 2012-02-03 05:53:58      
You must get straight A+ at english lol
By: Okand - 2012-02-02 19:30:08      
I'll probably write another one uhhh idk when
By: Koori_shinobi - 2012-02-02 18:59:54  + 2   - 1 
O.O Mooooooore.
By: pyro22 - 2012-02-02 18:58:11      
Continue the good work!
By: ohya5 - 2012-02-02 18:31:39      
very good.



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