Poem : Veil Of Dark
Black rose petals fall from the skies and tears drops off your cheeks, this dark veil covering your body, full of a dark twisted madness making you feel out of control, burning your thoughts away into many ashes they fly, hear the whispers yet? Feel the pain? Can’t you see it...the dark truth flashing before your eyes...do you feel the blood coursing through your veins and into the streets yet? Watch these shadows walk along the wall and await for their commands to break silence...no other choice so why not just give into it all? Watch the world burn with them...hear the painful screams fill the air...
Please Comment, let me know what kind of poems you like, give me ideas :3 Thank You
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XxDarkWatersxX
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XxDarkWatersxX
nah i wanted ideas its just you made it seem like critisizum plus i was explaining how i was taught and how i didnt think it would work
Dagarus
HAHAHAHA You're a funny one. I was not critisizing you but instead was trying to help you. You should not have written ''Please Comment, let me know what kind of poems you like, give me ideas :3 Thank You'' if you don't want ideas.
XxDarkWatersxX
i like it the way it is, slam poetry isnt short its like this, its that way i taught myself and way i was taught in a poetry class
Dagarus
Great imageries, now try adding clever metaphors, similies, and RHYMES! Also, write it in a poem's way, not a paragraph.
By XxDarkWatersxX
i like it the way it is, slam poetry isnt short its like this, its that way i taught myself and way i was taught in a poetry class
a year ago