Caught in this World

This article was written by Midael on 2012-01-09 under Novels & Stories.

"You're assigned to Earth. You serve a special purpose. Now go." An angelic commander said. The troops nodded in understanding and after a quick "Antio" (angelic for goodbye e.e) to their families, they left to the incarnation chamber. This chamber was specialized to "shoot" your soul into a body of your choosing. The ideal selection were people who were generally living by themselves, but still in contact with a majority of technology. The less ideal ones were children or old men/women. The soldiers said a quick prayer and one by one, stepped in the chamber.


Earth Side


"Damn it dood, that's not even fair" Markus said after throwing down his controller. Markus was playing with 2 of his best friends, Alex and Jason. They basically did everything together, or almost everything. That list was soon to be narrowed though, little to their knowledge.

"It was totally fair" Alex said after laughing.

"No.. it wasn't.." Jason mumbled as he put down his controller. "Absolute bullshit".

They all sighed and put down the controllers as the credits played. They had just beaten another game, while Alex led the role.

"What now?" Markus asked his two friends. They looked at each other, smiled  then dog piled on Markus. As they were all yelling, Markus's brother came downstairs.

"What. The. FUCK. Are you doing, dumbasses" Jordon, Markus's brother shouted. Everyone freezed and looked at him. They all thought he was a major pain and normally hated being around him.

"Another one of your orgy things, yeah?" he said, mimicking a british voice. He normally did that when he was insulting his brother and his friends. With an annoyed sigh, he walked up to the 3 friends.

"I don't want any of your fuckery today. I'm not exactly in a good mood. And Markus, while you're getting raped by your friends, did you tell them about your little mistake yesterday?"

Markus looked uneasily at Jordon, and stuck up his middle finger.

"Well, Markus was supposed to buy you all tickets for the basketball game next week, right? Well, instead he went paintballing with me and completely forg-" Jordon stopped mid-sentence, clawing at his throat. He seemed to be choking on something, but noone knew. Markus quickly ran up and started hitting his brother on the back, but nothing seemed to work. Jason fell down backwards, seeing everything as merely a spiral of colors. He drifted away.

Everyone stared at Markus's lifeless body, stunned and paralyzed. They didn't know what to do. As Jason was about to say something, a shining, sparkling light emitted from Jordon's body. His eyes, his mouth, every orifice he had (Orifice = opening or hole). The whole room was ablaze with light. 

"Whats going on!!!!?!?!?!" Everyone screamed.





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16 Comments:


By: royhugonigel - 2012-01-10 00:55:41      
He he he .... So the smurf finally sees...
Im beginning to like this story.
By: Midael - 2012-01-10 00:48:51      
True.
By: wingking7000 - 2012-01-10 00:47:50      
I'm liking this story. :D
By: royhugonigel - 2012-01-10 00:47:07      
Ehhh.... Your sentence would've been better if you had finished it "enough attention"
By: Midael - 2012-01-10 00:32:22      
What the typical american parents with 2 or more children do when they don't pay attention enough.
By: royhugonigel - 2012-01-10 00:24:56      
I'm sorry, but picturing BB the Smurf as a writer is just not possible....
By: royhugonigel - 2012-01-10 00:18:02      
What did the parents do to end up with a son like Markus?
By: CuraSkyshot - 2012-01-10 00:00:03      
Keep writing O.O must read moar
By: Ying-Yang - 2012-01-09 23:59:45      
This has GOT to be published :D
By: Ying-Yang - 2012-01-09 23:57:17      
I know right? Keep 'em coming! *waits patiently*
By: NephilimZaggy - 2012-01-09 23:55:06      
Just read it. PRETTY FUCKIN EPIC
By: NephilimZaggy - 2012-01-09 23:47:25      
I havent read it yet. AM I IN IT?
By: Ying-Yang - 2012-01-09 23:44:47      
Lol I know right? Eh I don't really care though. XD
By: Vaiden - 2012-01-09 23:42:54  + 1   - 1 
O_o alot of cussing.
By: ohya5 - 2012-01-09 23:34:11      
self-freaking-amazing
By: Midael - 2012-01-09 23:30:22      
First story in a while .-.



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