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"INVICTUS" CH.5 LIADA
Hey everyone,that's Raven with the 5th chapter of my book!It's a little small and that's why,later today i'm gonna publish another one.Here it is!Enjoy!(Caution:It contains REAL atlantean forcecraft)
Competition:Who can guess who's torturing Liada in the Chapter by the same name?The winner of the competition gets A PAGE FULL OF SPOILERS or AN EXTRA CHAPTER EXCLUSIVELY FOR HIM/HER!
INVICTUS
CHAPTER 5:LIADA
Liada Nightshade woke up from her dream,covered in sweat.The queen of the Elves looked around and quickly realised she wasn't on Alfheim.Not any more.
She tried to understand, but it was all so dark...Or maybe...No,she didn't want to think of this.Nonetheless,what she could realise was that she was hunged,upside down.She tried to unbind herself,but the chains holding her were obviously enchanted.Whoever held her prisoner knew the limits of Liada's powers.But still,she could try.
“Liht”,she chanted.Atlantean forcecraft wasn't her forte,but still she could still do some 1st Circle spells.The chamber was filled with light.
She was in The Abyss.Now,she knew who held her prisoner.What the heck,she thought.Last time she checked, that person was burning in the deepest pits of Purgatory.They had history.The Queen of the Elves tried to break her binding,again,this time in a magical way.But in vain.Only then she realised what she was bound with.It was the Chain of Akhenaton.
And the silence was interrupted by a familiar voice.
“Well,well,well.Hello,Your Majesty!”,he mocked her. “Now you probably wonder how you even got here.I will explain everything.In time,of course.”
“What did you do to Tamlin?”,asked a now clearly horrified Liada.
“Oh,don't worry!He's just...''sleeping''.And he will keep ''sleeping'' for the rest of eternity, unless---”
“If you are hoping that I am going to make any kind of deal with a Nephilim, you are fooled!”
“I was hoping you would say that”,replied the man, with a sardonic smile forming in his lips.
“Kamur!”,she chanted in atlantean,shooting a lightning towards the him.
The man didn't seem to bother at all.He absorbed the lightning with the reverse side of his palm.
“Really now,Liada?I expected better from you!Now,let's see how you will react in this!”
The man didn't need a spell.He was clearly an expert in inflicting pain with is mind-an ability also known as Crucikinesis.He protested his palm forward.And the room was filled with Liada's screams.
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19 Comments:
get ready Midael.you appear in ch.8 and your story is more analysed in ch.14
Dang, all my stories suck, well there as good as this in my mind but when it hits the keyboard it sucks
Its Meeee. The character who is torturing Liada is Zag AKA Meeee
Epic chapter. Keep em coming!
Lol,thanks a lot!!!!!!I didn't expect you to like it that much!
'Liada's screams' That was the part that got me, haha ^_^ It was like it was really happening, I even got a little scared.
-LiadaNightshade
P.S. That's some writing ^_^
Like it Liada?Hehe,i told you I wouldn't make your character boring
*unbind
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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